Англоязычная публикация международного уровня: структура, содержание, стиль. (Часть 2) презентация

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

Структура (исследовательской) статьи: IMRaD

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

TITLES
ENGAGING:
INFORMATIVE

ENGAGING TITLES
Things to try:
Make sure your title contains no more than one or two abstract or collective nouns

ENGAGING TITLES
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Avoid predictable “academic verbs”, especially in participle form

ENGAGING TITLES
Things to try:
Include one or two words that you would not expect to find in any title in the
same journal

ENGAGING TITLES
Things to try:
Make sure your title contains no more than one or two abstract or collective nouns
Avoid predictable “academic verbs”, especially in participle form
Include one or two words that you would not expect to find in any title in the
same journal

TITLES
Development of a Technical and Technological Solution for the Production of Carrot Nectar...
Investigation of the contact surfaces between the polymer matrix and metallic glasses in the composite materials based on high density polyethylene
Study of the Effect of Sex and Type of Muscles on the Development of Quality Defects in Turkey Meat after the Slaughter......
Preparation and investigation of the electrode material for supercapacitors via composite humic acids and graphene oxide as a precursor
Analyzing performance of boring bars in machining by improving their damping properties using composite material
Analysis of adsorption of COOh-functionalized multiwall carbon nanotubes

Oliver Sacks (neurologist, the journal Brain)
Richard Dawkins (evolutionary biologist)
TITLES
The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat and Other Clinical Tales
Musicophilia: Tales of Music and the Brain
A Leg to Stand On
The Selfish Gene
The Blind Watchmaker
Climbing Mount Improbable

TITLE
Broadly explains what the paper is about.

TITLE
TIPS
Your title must be a direct, clear invitation to a particular conversation.
Papers with titles
between 31 and 40
characters are cited the most.
Titles containing
a comma or colon are
cited more.
Avoid question marks and exclamation
marks. The title should convey the most interesting and surprising new results from the study.
Broadly explains what the paper is about.

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

AUTHOR(S)
Indicates the given name(s) and family name(s) of each author.

AUTHOR(S)
TIPS
The person who writes the manuscript is usually the “first author”. The second most important position is the last person of the list.
In between those two
critical positions, you will
find everyone else in
order of importance.
So the second position is
the third best, the third is the fourth best, etc.
Indicates the given name(s) and family name(s) of each author.

AFFILIATION
Presents the authors' affiliation addresses (where the actual work was done).
Provides the full postal address of each affiliation, including the country name and, if available, the e-mail address of each author.

AFFILIATION
TIPS
An affiliation is an institution that pays the authors for their work.
Authors can have multiple affiliations. Be aware that each affiliation is attributed a share of the author’s scores. This means that an author
with affiliations in several countries will not count fully in each.
Presents the authors' affiliation addresses (where the actual work was done).
Provides the full postal address of each affiliation, including the country name and, if available, the e-mail address of each author.

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

ABSTRACT

ABSTRACT

ABSTRACT: Descriptive
– Short - usually less than 100 words.
– Includes:
• purpose of the work (objectives)
• method used
• scope of the work
– Doesn’t include:
• results, conclusions and recommendations

ABSTRACT: Informative
Fairly short – less than 250 words
– Includes:
• purpose of the work (objectives)
• method used
• scope of the work
• results
• conclusions and recommendations

ABSTRACT: Structured
Make use of some version of the IMRD paper format, even when the article itself is not a report of original research.

ABSTRACT: Graphical
Unusual reactions mediated by FMN-dependent ene- and nitro-reductases
by Katarina Durchschein, Melanie Hall, Kurt Faber
Royal Society of Chemistry, Issue 7, 2013

ABSTRACT: Examples
The state policy of the Russian Federation in the field of the healthy nutrition of the population includes a set of measures aimed at meeting the needs of various groups of the population for healthy nutrition, taking into account their traditions, habits and economic situation (45 words). The complex system development of the consumer food market, in addition to the economic aspect, covers the issues of public health, demography, effective nature management, resource saving and ecology (29 words). The current scientific approaches in the field of healthy food production involve the addition of functional ingredients, biologically active substances or probiotic microorganisms capable of replenishing the deficiency of necessary substances to a base product (35 words). However, in addition to their high nutritional value, healthy food products must be absolutely safe and be of high quality, which is extremely difficult to realize in the present conditions of raw material production (34 words). The review provides a rationale that the organic products manufactured using traditional technologies without the addition of chemical fertilizers, pesticides, food additives, hormonal and other drugs, can be attributed to healthy food products (33 words). The development of the organic sector of food production at the state level will allow not only to implement the adopted normative acts within the framework of the state policy of healthy nutrition, but also to fundamentally improve the situation in other areas: economy, health and ecology (47 words)
223 words

ABSTRACT: Examples
Based on perspectives of the philosophy for science of dairy and postgenomic ideas the historical aspects, an attempt has been made to formulate the paradigm of LactOmics as a logical generalization of LipidOmics, ProteOmics and GlycOmics. The depth of experience is maintained thousands years. First paper was published 400 years ago. Up-to-date concepts have been cluster formed. The technology platform of LactOmics is based on the bio-nano-electromembrane technique of the dairy industry modernization, as part of full import replacement with export orientation. This provides the national Food safety for the entire range of dairy products for the determined population groups. (101 words)
1D Tubular-type and 3D diamond-like coordination polymers are formed upon combining pyridyl appended p-tert-butyltetrathiacalix[4] arene in 1,3-alternate conformation tectons 4 and 5 with mercury(II) chloride. (24 words)

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

KEYWORDS: Examples
Food safety; the mutual adaptation of agro-industrial complex technologies; system technological complex; the synergetics of complex technological systems; the interoperability, nonlinearity and instability of technological complexes; the self-organization of a technological complex; the mutual reinforcement of combined technologies; the industrialization of agricultural technologies; the main provisions of the paradigm for the development of agro-industrial complex technologies

KEYWORDS: Examples
Diamond, necessity, use of force, Russia
Civilization
Regions
Forecasting
Resistance
Transportation
Network
Monitoring
Theory

KEYWORDS: Examples
Diamond, necessity, use of force, Russia (law)
Civilization (Aviation and Aerospace)
Regions (Форсайт)
Forecasting (Приборостроение)
Resistance (Кардиология)
Transportation (Моделирование и анализ информационных систем)
Network (Моделирование и анализ информационных систем)
Monitoring (Неврологический журнал)
Theory (Political Studies)

KEYWORDS
TIPS
Avoid words with a broad meaning.
Use the words already included in the title and the abstract.
(Check the journal requirements)

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

HIGHLIGHTS
TIPS
Include 3 to 5 highlights.
There should be a maximum
of 85 characters, including spaces, per highlight.
Only core results of the paper should be covered.
Provide a short collection of bullet points that convey the core findings and provide readers with a quick textual overview of the article.

HIGHLIGHTS

Структура научной статьи: метаданные

REFERENCES
Lists significant published works.
Cites all the scientific publications on which your work is based.

REFERENCES
TIPS
Before using citation management software (EndNote, RefWorks, Mendeley, etc.), check the journal's requirements.
Cite papers from the journal to which the paper will be submitted. Include most recent papers from the domain. Cite papers that other researchers in your domain see as important and cite often themselves.
Never cite what you have not read.
Lists significant published works.
Cites all the scientific publications on which your work is based.

Mendeley — бесплатная программа для управления библиографической информацией, позволяющая хранить и просматривать исследовательские труды в формате PDF, а также имеющая подключение к международной социальной сети учёных.
EndNote — коммерческая система управления библиографической информацией, применяемая для управления ссылками и библиографией, позволяющая отформатировать их согласно многочисленным стандартам цитирования.

INTRODUCTION

INTRODUCTION
TIPS
Use personal pronouns
(I/we) to announce the research and principle findings.
Organize the introduction
from general background to specific, relating to your research.

MATERIALS & METHODS
Describes (if necessary, defends) the experimental design.
Provides enough detail so that a competent worker can repeat the experiment.
Provides information that will let readers judge the appropriateness of the experimental methods.
Includes the exact technical specifications and quantities and sources or methods of preparation.

MATERIALS & METHODS
TIPS
Provide a short summary of the research method(s).
Research aims, questions, hypothesis.
Describe where the research
took place and possible why.
Describe the procedure used to obtain the data.
Limitations.
Do not repeat the details of
the established methods. List the methods in the logical order in which you conducted the research.
Avoid adding comments.
Describes (if necessary, defends) the experimental design.
Provides enough detail so that a competent worker can repeat the experiment.
Provides information that will let readers judge the appropriateness of the experimental methods.
Includes the exact technical specifications and quantities and sources or methods of preparation.

RESULTS
TIPS
Use personal pronouns (I/we) to express your responsibility for particular methodological decisions.
Use past tense when referring to your results.
Use tables to present the actual experimental results.
Use figures for comparisons of experimental results with those of previous works, or with calculated/theoretical values.
Do not include references.
Gives some kind of overall description of the experiment, providing the big picture.
Provides representative data.
Constitutes the new knowledge that the author is contributing to the world.

RESULTS
Gives some kind of overall description of the experiment, providing the big picture.
Provides representative data.
Constitutes the new knowledge that the author is contributing to the world.

DISCUSSION
Presents the principles, relations, and generalizations shown by your research findings.
Points out any exceptions or any lack of correlation.
Shows how your results and interpretations agree (or contrast) with previously published works.
Provides theoretical implications of your research, as well as any possible practical applications.

DISCUSSION
TIPS
Use personal pronouns (I/we) to claim responsibility for findings that may carry novelty to the scientific community.
Use of the first person is generally acceptable, but too much use of the first person can actually distract the reader from the main points.
Never ignore work in disagreement with yours.
Presents the principles, relations, and generalizations shown by your research findings.
Points out any exceptions or any lack of correlation.
Shows how your results and interpretations agree (or contrast) with previously published works.
Provides theoretical implications of your research, as well as any possible practical applications.

CONCLUSION
Highlights key points in your analysis or results. Notes important or unexpected implications applied to practice. Summarizes your thoughts and conveys the significance of your study and the importance of your ideas. Identifies how a gap in the literature has been addressed.
Introduces possible new or expanded ways of thinking about the research problem. Offers new insights and creative approaches for
the research problem based on the results of your study.

CONCLUSION
TIPS
Use Present Simple to write about what is now known or is still needed.
Do not introduce new information.
Do not repeat the abstract.
Do not list experimental results.
Highlights key points in your analysis or results. Notes important or unexpected implications applied to practice. Summarizes your thoughts and conveys the significance of your study and the importance of your ideas. Identifies how a gap in the literature has been addressed.
Introduces possible new or expanded ways of thinking about the research problem. Offers new insights and creative approaches for
the research problem based on the results of your study.

ACKNOWLEGEMENTS
Acknowledges any significant technical help received from any individual, as well as any outside financial assistance, such as grants or fellowships.

ACKNOWLEGEMENTS
TIPS
Avoid the word "wish". Before mentioning someone in Acknowledgement, obtain permission from him or her.
Acknowledges any significant technical help received from any individual, as well as any outside financial assistance, such as grants or fellowships.

MISCELLANEOUS: Modality
We may say that the interactional «in-between» becomes the source of operative intentionality of interacting partners.
Instead of following this frequently discussed line of thought in contemporary phenomenology, however, I would like to focus on another possibility of developing the above considered views of mutual incorporation and participatory sense-making.
As far as I know, a relational ethics of the type hinted aptly by Torrance and Colombetti has not been developed in the phenomenological tradition.
It seems plausible to conclude that the dynamics of care and mutual concern central to the ethics of care might be well analysed and further developed in terms of phenomenological and enactive views of intersubjectivity.
Under these circumstances, it seems useful to me to call attention to care ethics as an already developed relational moral theory built on the idea of the centrality of the relational domain. In this paper, my modest aim is to suggest a reason why phenomenologists and care ethicists should care about each other.

MISCELLANEOUS: AmE / BrE
In the process of mutual incorporation, we experience that there is not just one center of gravity localized in one’s own lived body, but two or more of them continuously oscillating between activity and receptivity. (175) Am.E
The paper concludes that the dynamics of care and mutual concern central to the ethics of care might be well analysed and further developed in terms of phenomenological and enactive views of intersubjectivity. (171) (Br.E)

MISCELLANEOUS: Lack of Unity
Using the density functional theory method in the generalized gradient approximation in this article, crystal structure and
properties of the carbon diamond-like LA10 phase, in which all the atomic positions are crystallographically equivalent, were calculated…. It is also established that the LA10 phase should be stable under normal conditions

MISCELLANEOUS: Relative Clauses
Our authors are well-known specialists, researchers, representatives of the Academies of Sciences, design bureaus, scientific and research institutes, universities, space agencies, who work in the spheres theoretical and applied aviation and astronautics.
At the close passage M loses one of its satellites, that is captured by Earth, and becomes our Moon.

MISCELLANEOUS: Agreement / Too many repetitions / Wrong reference / Unclear sentences
Abstract. The themes of the work is connected with solving problems of modeling in problem of the evolution of the Solar system. The new astronomical hypothesis is built within scientific interpretation of some history events. It is developing the first works of I. Velikovskiy. These events are reflected in cosmogonies theory, based on archeological studies .It is given the survey material on problems and methods of modeling in dynamics of the interaction of the large cosmic object with the Earth, including multidisciplinary processes of seizure of the body by Earth. It developed the author's points in theory of evolutions.

MISCELLANEOUS: Sloppy approach to writing
Abstract. A principle of probability balance of states is proposed for study of non-stationary queuing system. System of equations for the balance in the complex domain is derived and solved with the use of Laplace images. The inverse Laplace transform is performed for the transition from images to probabilities in the time domain. The developed method is recommended to study non-stationary queueing systems under arbitrary distributions.
Keywords: система обслуживания, комплексная вероятность состояния, изображение Лапласа, баланс состояний, система уравнений, вероятность во временной области

1-я Международная научно-практическая конференция
Academic Writing in a Global World: Current Challenges and Future Perspectives
19-20 октября 2018 года
Москва
ЦЕЛИ КОНФЕРЕНЦИИ:
повышение осведомленности о передовой практике и международных стандартах центров письма
создание благоприятной среды для профессионального роста академиков и научной коммуникации на всей территории России
повышение профессионального роста российских авторов научных публикаций.
совершенствование навыков академического письма и критического мышления на английском языке
управление публикационной деятельностью в образовательных и научных организациях
http://nwcc-conference.tilda.ws/#rec63554501