Досрочный ЕГЭ-2023. Письменная часть презентация

37.
We have recently had a discussion about mass media. Which media do you use most often? What do you think about modern TV programs? How often do you read the news online or in the print media?
I went to the media museum in … yesterday. - ask 3 questions about
the visit to the museum
the museum
your friend

37.
I spend too much time watching TV. What TV shows or TV series do you watch? Do you watch TV while eating your dinner, why or why not? What makes a good film for you?
Last week I was a volunteer at a local sport event… - ask 3 questions about the event

Actually,
So
… As for me,
Frankly speaking / To tell the truth,

37.
I have recently participated in a school swimming competition, and my family supported me. What’s the best thing about your family? What do you usually talk to your parents about? Do you prefer spending your free time with your family or friends, why?
I’m going to a summer arts camp in August. – ask 3 questions about the arts camp
Thing? Person in general?
Event?

38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on the main reasons for choosing a university by teenagers in Zetland. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below).
Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem with choosing a university and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of higher education.

38.2 Imagine that you are doing a project on what school project topics are popular among Zetland teenagers. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the pie chart below).
Comment on the data in the pie chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that can arise with doing a school project and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of school projects.

38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on why some Zetlanders move to big cities. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below).
Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that can arise with moving to a big city and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on living in a big city.

Кавычки?
34% of the respondents voted for “to get a new job”.

38.2 Imagine that you are doing a project on afterschool clubs most popular with Zetland teenagers. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the pie chart below).
Comment on the data in the pie chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that one can face when choosing an afterschool club and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of participating in afterschool clubs for the young.

38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on the best way of preparing for exams, according to Zetland high school students. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below).
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem with preparing for exams and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of final exams.

38.2 Imagine that you are doing a project on what type of leisure activities are most appealing to Zetland youth. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the pie chart below).
Comment on the data in the pie chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that teenagers can face with spending leisure time and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining the role of leisure activities in the life of the youth.

Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that can arise with moving to a big city and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on living in a big city.
38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on why some Zetlanders move to big cities. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). Write 200–250 words.

– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that can arise with moving to a big city and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on living in a big city.
38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on why some Zetlanders move to big cities. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). Write 200–250 words.

– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that can arise with moving to a big city and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on living in a big city.
38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on why some Zetlanders move to big cities. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). Write 200–250 words.

1. Вступление:
The aim of my project is to examine why some people in Zetland decide to move to big cities. As part of my project, I have found a table with some results of relevant opinion polls, and in this essay, I will describe the data and express my opinion on the subject of the project.

2. Факты (2-3):
2. According to the table, getting a new job (33%) tops the list of the reasons for moving to big cities / is the most popular reason for moving to big cities, followed by developing one’s business (27%) and getting a better education (26%). Having more entertainment and making new friends are at the other end of the spectrum, at 9% and 5% respectively.

3. Сравнение (1-2):
3. Interestingly, getting a new job was more than three times as frequently named/cited by the respondents as having more entertainment. I think this difference can be explained by the fact that having a job is the top priority for the surveyed people and finding a job is much more important for them than getting entertained.

4. Проблема и решение:
4. Although living in big cities is beneficial in many ways, there are some serious problems connected with moving there. One of the problems is that it is very hard for some people to get used to the fast pace of city life (, huge crowds, constant noise and endless traffic jams). To solve this problem, one should practise slow living and give oneself time to adjust to a new way of life / turn to a professional psychologist for help and develop some ways to cope with this problem.

Apparently, helping the environment is an essential thing to do, and if people stop doing it, they are sure to face some problems.

5. Заключение:
5. In conclusion, despite some problems associated with living in big cities, I believe that it is a good idea. I have no doubt about it because its advantages far outweigh any possible downsides.

Финальный вариант:
1. The aim of my project is to examine why some people in Zetland decide to move to big cities. As part of my project, I have found a table with some results of relevant opinion polls, and in this essay, I will describe the data and express my opinion on the subject of the project.
2. According to the table, getting a new job (33%) tops the list of the reasons for moving to big cities, followed by developing one’s business (27%) and getting a better education (26%). Having more entertainment and making new friends are at the other end of the spectrum, at 9% and 5% respectively.
3. Interestingly, getting a new job was more than three times as frequently named by the respondents as having more entertainment. I think this difference can be explained by the fact that having a job is the top priority for the surveyed people and finding a job is much more important for them than getting entertained.
4. Although living in big cities is beneficial in many ways, there are some serious problems connected with moving there. One of the problems is that it is very hard for some people to get used to the fast pace of city life, huge crowds, constant noise and endless traffic jams. To solve this problem, one should practise slow living and give oneself time to adjust to a new way of life.
5. In conclusion, despite some problems associated with living in big cities, I believe that it is a good idea. I have no doubt about it because its advantages far outweigh any possible downsides. (266w.)

Вопросы из группы
Была бы очень благодарна, если бы Вы объяснили, как эксперты относятся к наличию запятых с defining relative clause и наоборот, отсутствию с non-defining: это пунктуация, грамматика, и то и другое, или вообще можно расслабиться.
Какое наказание за несоблюдение правил переноса слов, spelling?
И последнее: russian - это spelling или пунктуация?

“As part of my project..." - разве не нужен артикль - As а part of my project? ...
, at 10% and 2% respectively. - здесь смущает "at". “Аt", насколько я понимаю, употребляется при анализе столбчатой диаграммы (где есть уровни), а не круговой (где доли, сегменты).

Another 10% of the respondents…

«Сказали ,что в этом году essay вообще нельзя писать. Нужно писать проект или вообще ничего не писать.» - МОЖНО

As IT can be seen / As is seen …
It can be seen / It is seen

? во вступлении в ЭТОМ году принимаются ОБА варианта:
+ Doing a project on... I have found...
+ Doing a project on... I found...
+ While doing a project on... I have found...
+ While doing a project on... I found...
? For my project I have found - НЕ считается ошибкой в порядке слов;
?в этом году еще принимается только лексический способ выполнить сравнение в 3-ем абзаце. Если написано There is a great difference between... / the difference between ... and ... is ... , и больше ничего, балл в ЭТОМ году НЕ снижается, такой способ принимается (в следующем году "скорее всего" только такой вариант приниматься не будет);
?слово majority можно использовать для обозначения самой большой группы респондентов (даже если эта группа составляет <50%;

Логика!
I have found a table … / some results of …
According to the table… / the data
1. … with some results of relevant opinion polls
2. … the respondents / those polled (surveyed)

Вступительная фраза -?