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Academic
writing
Formal
Impersonal
Objective
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1. Formal
Use:
academic vocabulary (Academic word list)
characteristic phrases of academic texts
e.g. with
respect to …, in terms of …, regarding…, in addition …
terminology, i.e. vocabulary characteristic of a specific field
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1. Formal (cont.)
Avoid:
idioms, colloquial words, phrasal verbs
e.g. this piece of
writing ? the present study
contracted forms
e.g. it’s ? it is
don’t ? do not
shouldn't ? should not
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2. Impersonal
Avoid using personal and possessive pronouns: I/ our/ you
etc.
Many of my friends and colleagues say that… ? It is commonly said that…
In my essay I’ll make it clear ? the present paper will clarify
Our study proves that ? This study shows that
I’m sure this is so. ? There is reason to believe that this is so.
We really couldn’t make anything of the results. ? There were difficulties in analyzing the results.
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2. Impersonal (cont.)
Emphasize things and ideas, instead of people and feelings.
Instead of writing:
I believe the model is valid, based on these findings.
Write:
These findings indicate that the model is valid
or The following section will show how the model is validated by the findings.
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2. Impersonal (cont.)
Avoid evaluative words, such as "badly", "disappointment", "amazing", etc.
I think this idea is awful. ? This idea may not be accurate.
In my opinion this is a wonderful topic. ? This topic is worth investigating because….
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2. Impersonal (cont.)
Avoid rhetorical questions
How could this trend affect the company
operation?
? It is worthy examining the effects the trend under consideration may have on the company operation.
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2. Impersonal (cont.)
Avoid exclamation marks
All students should have lessons in
plagiarism avoidance from day one!!!
? Students may require instruction on plagiarism avoidance at the start of their first year.
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3. Objective
Precision
pets like cats, dogs, etc. ? pets, such as
cats and dogs,
around half of the group ? approximately 53% of the group
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3. Objective (cont.)
Caution to avoid intense or emotional evaluative language
Parents
who smoke are obviously abusing their children.
? Second hand smoke has some harmful effects on children’s health.
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3. Objective (cont.)
‘Vague’, tentative language (HEDGING)
I think second-hand smoke causes cancer.
? Second-hand smoke may cause cancer
or There is evidence to support the possibility that second-hand smoke increases the risk of cancer.
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3. Objective (cont.)
Reference to sources
instead of writing:
Language is, in my
view, clearly something social.
write
As Halliday (1973) shows, language is intrinsically social.
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4. Text organisation
easy to follow (introduction, main body, conclusion)
sensible components (paragraphs,
subsections, main sections)
paragraph structure